A2 Short Film - Draft Version

I finally managed to complete my A2 production film, so it looks more or less reasonable to understand the narrative. The feedback from the audience was surprising. Audience were thinking that instead of sci-fi film, it appeared to be more psychological, which was very surprising for me. Another interesting thing was about notes. Some people thought it would be better to deliver notes through voice over, rather putting them on the screen. However, the notes were written by hand, which made them look a little unattractive(as you will see in the video below). For this reason, I have decided to change the style of the notes, to make them look good. 

Please watch the draft version of my film: